Can you see, the people around you
Trying to chase their dreams, It’s not your job to ruin it for Them and act like the clown; Can you see, all the people, That come in to advice and Teach you, don’t make mistakes That you will regret.
Can you see, your coach or teacher Praising you for your good deeds, Does that feel good to you; Can you see, yourself after all These years of achievements, You’ve bought them back down And you realise you have hit ‘it’ THE ROCK BOTTOM!!!
Can you see, you’ve hit so hard That you might not be able to climb back up; Have the time to reflect on yourself, And go down the right path.

June 22, 2015 at 9:26 am
nice poem lazaro
July 6, 2015 at 12:01 pm
I agree, Adam, it has a clear and consistent theme and some interesting expressions. The Anaphora is used well too.
Would you be able to format it so that the lines are not spread all across the page. What you need to do is press the “Return” key. If you don’t want it to skip a line press “Shift” when you do.